12 sept 2004

29. Ted Greenwald, "Anyway"

This one wouldn't have made the cut if I were selecting the poems. It does have a nervous, zany music to its repetition, which might be enough to sustain a poem:

"Keep on giving, everbody's great
And keep on, a few directions
The same language, forward to giving

Translate from to, everybody's great
And keep on, forward to going
Translate from to, miss so much"

Greenwald repeats similar rhythmic patterns six separate times, with results of varying interest. 7.

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