Round 23

Yusef: "Max Jacob's Shoes" by Ray González

Bob: "Surrealist Love Life" by Gene Frumkin

Two homages to surrealism. González's is a coherent, Edsonesque prose poem (although better than Edson), while Frumkin's is more discontinuous, unpredictable in its movements. I like both poems. Although both are one remove from real surrealism, Frumkin has a slight edge because he is trying harder to get at the real thing. Bob wins, regaining his narrow majority.

Score after 23:

7-12-4