Round 23
Yusef: "Max Jacob's Shoes" by Ray González
Bob: "Surrealist Love Life" by Gene Frumkin
Two homages to surrealism. González's is a coherent, Edsonesque prose poem (although better than Edson), while Frumkin's is more discontinuous, unpredictable in its movements. I like both poems. Although both are one remove from real surrealism, Frumkin has a slight edge because he is trying harder to get at the real thing. Bob wins, regaining his narrow majority.
Score after 23:
7-12-4
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